- Went to online photo sources to try to get some working images of my characters.
- Not sure if I need to pick up the pace of the action. [Keeping in mind the age and preferences of readership.] It always feels like it’s dragging to me, but details are needed.
- I generally don’t provide enough description, so I have to balance that with keeping the action moving.
- Just recently local writer Gary Corbin reminded his audience that each scene needs to lead to some kind of change in character or action. Will try to keep that in mind.