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Yes, your border collie will do just fine.  border collie

Take note of when he:

  • cocks his head [your protagonist’s actions strayed too far from her core character]
  • lets his attention drift to backyard activity [your dialogue isn’t advancing the plot]
  • growls [waaaaay too much exposition]

TMH

Writer. Former teacher. Baker. Spoiler of dogs.

2 Comments

Virginia · July 16, 2017 at 7:02 pm

This is waaaaay too hilarious! 😆🙃😅

    TMH · July 16, 2017 at 7:34 pm

    You’re too nice, Virginia, but glad you liked it. Dogs seem to resonate with me.

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